This is...oh, it is so alive. The Doctor and Rose are very much themselves, and Jackie is Jackie, and the five-year-old Tony and his rocket ship shirt made me absolutely crack up. Your dialogue is very good and your emotional moments are deep and touching without slipping into melodrama. I fell in love several times while I read this, with everybody.
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Date: 2009-04-09 03:33 pm (UTC)"You were the mark, weren't you?"
Ha. Lovely work.